
My partners comments helped my adjust and completely change my image. I used an image of a army toy soldier to show the size of each organization group of the army. I also removed the colors which were inappropriate.
Lastly, I used the information from the text to create my image. First, I had the image of the army toys direct the readers eyes towards the words (149). The army troops are pointing to the words with their guns, which draws the reader in. Also, I added the visual details of the army toys to draw the reader in (149).
Original image and comments are below.
Your revision does such a good job of explaining the content! Great example.
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